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 affected by poor PSFs in the stack.
 
-  ** 
+  ** th
+
+
+## Section 3.11
+
+transient source -> transient sources
+
+  ** fixed.
+
+## Section 4.1.3
+
+I was confused when first encountering the word "files" here because
+up to this point I had been thinking of the DVO as just another MySQL
+(or other SQL-ish) database, and I wasn't sure what kind of files were
+being referred to. I think it'd be helpful to briefly describe the
+overall architecture of the DVO as (mostly?) spatially sharded files
+at the beginning of section 4, even if the details of the partitioning
+aren't described until 4.1.3.
+
+Missing punctuation in parenthetical HST GSC reference?
+
+  ** fixed
+